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三大法宝助你雅思大作文先声夺人
最近的课程里出现了几位有开头恐惧症的学员,他们的问题很一致:老师,我思路很多,但就是不会写第一句,你能帮帮我吗?那有什么法宝让作文的首句先声夺人呢?
注意:以下的奉送的范文都仅仅是开头的第一句,不是整个开头哦!
法宝一:解释核心概念。
比如这一篇:
The process of growing up is very complex for children. Among countless factors influencing children’s growth, the behaviors of adults play a significant role in shaping their inclination and character.
这里明显道出了孩童成长是有多么复杂,并且解释了成年人的行为在他们的成长中其实有着绝对的影响力。这种开头的好处就是展现题目中最重要的某个概念,解释其定义,展现其重要性,并引出其他的相关内容。这样开头的惯用句式有:
By definition, … usually implies …
In people’s knowledge, … means …
The importance of … is highly appreciated by public because …
法宝二:同一情况在不同条件下的对比
各位来看这两篇:
The traffic in urban areas, especially in highly-developed metropolis, has presented considerable efficiency comparing with small towns.
Educational facilities of past days is not as advanced as today as well as the teaching quality.
第一篇明显是关于交通问题的题目,然而开头段在对比在不同地域中交通发展的差异,从而引出该核心概念的话题;第二篇关于教育的话题在开头更多的展现了在不同时间里教学设施和质量的偏差以来体现如今的教育是多么的先进。无论是时间的对比还是地点的对比,在开头段中可以给出的信息已经足够多,也足够高分了。这样开头的惯用句式有:
By contrast, … seems better than … because
The development of … has changed … and it is more advanced than …
… can be different in various of locations because …
法宝三:用某个事例引出核心概念
大家请看这篇神作:
It is convinced that the memory of holding a successful Olympic games in 2008 is a stimulation to Chinese citizens and the government because of the economic profits being made and the reputation being gained.
题目中用北京2008年的奥运会作为引子,引出了体育赛事或重大的运动会可以产生经济利益和国际声誉,这为后面要印出来的内容铺平了道路。这一招需要考生有一定的知识面和语言组织能力,惯用的句式有:
The event of … happened in … is a perfect example to prove …
People worldwide must remember …
It is convinced that the memory of … is … because …
今天先到这里,希望各位消除开头恐惧!如有任何问题,记得在下面留言@Nick老师哦!
-- by Nick
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