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雅思写作议论性题目的表现力如何增强?

 雅思写作考试的基础就是雅思词汇,但中国考生的特点是词汇记住了不知道该怎么用,雅思写作考试中大部分题都会是议论性的,需要我们充分运用雅思写作技巧,今天雅思考试小编就详细的给大家说说,希望可以帮助到各位考生。

 雅思写作技巧一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。

 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。

 这个技巧并不是那么容易掌握,但是确实是一个能够提高雅思写组成绩的非常实用的技巧。

 例如:

 Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

 Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)

 Or:The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

 2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。

 例如:1) Weak:The team members are good players.

 Revision:The team members play well.

 2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

 Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

 3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。

 例如:

 1) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion.

 Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists.

 2) Weak:Here are the books you ordered.

 Revision:The books you ordered have arrived.

 雅思写作技巧二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。

 这样的具体描写可以让文章看起来更具说服力,当然也就可以提高雅思写作成绩了。

 例如:

 1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk.

 Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

 2、Poor:She is a careful shopper.

 Better:She compares prices and quality.

 雅思写作技巧三、尽量运用主动语态。

 之所以要这样做,是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用主动,什么时候该用被动。用错了,当然也就谈不上提高雅思写作成绩了。

 例如:

 1、Weak:The organization has been supported by charity.

 Better:Charity has supported the organization.

 2、Weak:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

 Better:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

 雅思写作技巧四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。

 想要提高雅思写作成绩就得使写作的用词简单,生动。

 例如:

 1、Wordy:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

 Improved:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

 2、Wordy:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your

recommendations.

 Improved:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

 3、Redundant:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry

laboratory caught fire.

 Improved:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught

fire.

 4、Redundant:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different

stores.

 Improved:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

 雅思写作技巧五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。

 这是语言考试,不是专业考试,提高雅思写作成绩的关键点在语言上,是文章的表现力上!

 例如:

 1、Weak:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

 Improved:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

 2、Weak:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next

fall.

 Improved:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next

fall.

 雅思写作技巧只在理论上了解是不够的,需要大家在实际备考中运用掌握。

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