雅思写作中让考官怒扣分的常见开头

写作是一项比较难以提高的的项目，主要是由于词汇语法和逻辑思维都有所差异，那么有哪些写作方式是比较常见的错误呢? 下面我们一起来看一下，请大家注意避免。

　　1.中式英文

　　Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily ……

　　Topic 2- The population problem　　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　2.观点模糊态度暧昧

　　Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　3.偏离主题

　　Topic-It is said that nowadays one cannot acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

题目要求回答的是大学教育是否能使人获得与成功有关的必要素质，但回答时却说完全无视“大学教育”这个主语，只谈论成功，离题严重。

　　4.语法错误惨不忍睹

　　Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished? (雅思真题)

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

From: Ashley

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